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Friday, November 25, 2016

Editing To Writing

   We are learning to edit our work and if you read my slide you can                          see some words is red I edited that.

                       
                                                           

1 comment:

  1. Hey Elham it's Summer
    I really like how I can tall that you have
    put a lot of work into this slide and a lot
    of time this is a awesome peace of work this
    is great maybe you can keep on working on this
    in till this story gets bigger and bigger keep
    up the great work Elham. (blog you later)

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